Review essay about "What is the Paris Club? | CNBC Explains"

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Paris club is an organization for the world's debt and saves defaults of many heavily indebted countries. This organization is important since there are many indebted countries even 2021 like Zambia, Bolivia, Argentina, Ecuador, Lebanon, and Syria. 

Also, the organization had wrote-off many debts. For example, in 2003 Iraq, U.S.A wrote-off 90% of Iraq's debt, and other countries involved in the Paris club also wrote-off the debt including German and France. Therefore, about 80% of Iraq's total debt was wrote-off. 

In 2020, there are still 277 trillion dollars of debt worldwide and it's about 365% of the global GDP. Even though developing countries' GDP is growing fast, about 248% for a year, but most of their benefits are spent paying the debt. 

Paris club consists of 22 permanent countries including South Korea. But, it has a critical weakness that China is not included in that 22 countries. 

Even though it has its critical weakness, since founded in 1956 to solve Argentina's debt problem, it had more than 472 agreements, eliminated 589 billion dollars of debts, and still doing its job by lowering the debt or extend the due date of paying debts. 

Paris club has six principles. Solidarity, consensus, information sharing, case by case, conditionality, and comparable terms. 

With these principles, the Paris club had done through until today. But, since China's economical growth is getting fast, its weakness is standing out. About 20% of the developing countries' debt has belonged to China. Therefore, its influence and power are getting decreased. 

In my opinion, the Paris club might solve the problems that IMF can't solve. Since the countries involved in the Paris club is less than IMF. It will contribute to the faster speed of making the decision. Also, if countries have too much debt and therefore rejected financial help from the IMF, they might have a second chance. 


Thank you. 

keywords: HIPC, French, China, six principles, debt, indebted, emerging markets.

Comments

  1. 1. 정보에 오류는 없는가?
    네~!
    2. 사실들의 인과관계는 잘 맞췄는가?
    네~
    3. 디테일에 대해서 흐름을 맞출 만큼 잘 기술했는가?
    네 깔끔하게 정리하셔서 잘 읽었습니다!
    4. 단어의 선택은 적절한가?
    네!
    5. 문법에 오류는 없는가?
    맨 마지막 문단에 두번째 문장에서 since 문장과 뒤에 오는 it contribute를 이어줘야 할 것 같습니다! imf 뒤에 컴마만 찍어주면 될 것 같아요. 그리고 countries가 주어기 때문에 동사가 is가 아니라 are이 와야 할 것 같아요!

    잘 읽었습니다!:)

    1번이 가장 중요하고 5번으로 갈수록 덜 중요함.

    +문장과 문맥은 훌륭한가?

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