This review essay may contain some errors about the objective truth. Also, this review essay is completely written by myself. Therefore might have a biased opinion. Please tell me if this essay includes some errors about the objective truth. Also, I like to hear your idea about my opinion. Please leave them on the comment.
In the video, the theater industry lost its momentum due to the novel coronavirus which swept across the world from 2020, until now.
Theater business had been constricted from 42.2 billion dollars to 11.4 billion dollars in total from the U.S.A and Canada.
Also, the enormous downsizing of the theater business decreased the making of the new movies. For instance, Batman, no time to die, Black widow, and other famous movies are halted of making.
Furthermore, the insurance costs are becoming higher and higher due to the increase of infection risk. According to the video, the insurance fee increased about 5 percent to 10 percent on average. And some insurance fees even raised up to 30 percent.
In this situation, OTT services stand for On The Top are on the rise.
Even though OTT services like Netflix were becoming popular and popular, the spread of novel coronavirus made OTT services to be even more flourish.
Netflix had invested over 700 million dollars in making and support making content in South Korea alone. On the other hand, many films and dramas go directly to the OTT services. Before that, it usually took 90 days to go to the OTT services after screening on the movie theater or TV channel.
However, despite those signs of the prosperity of the OTT services, the cinema industry seems to revive again. In China, the cinema industry gained 468 million dollars in revenue alone. Also, "Demon Slayer", the Japanese manga movie had made 44 million dollars in revenue too. It even becomes popular in South Korea too.
Those signs mean that the cinema industry will secure its place from the invasion of the OTT services.
In my opinion, I believe that OTT services will earn money constantly and become more prosperous. But, I also believe that the cinema industry will be continued since the OTT and cinema are two different types of entertainment services.
First of all, when I visit the cinema, I feel like I went to the amusement park. The experience I get from the cinema is totally refreshing and amusing.
Also, for many people, the cinema is like a place for a date too. Therefore, I believe cinema will keep alive even through the rise of the OTT service. Like the amusement park despite the prosperity of the online game.
Secondly, even though we can watch the same content with the OTT much easily and cheaply compared to the cinema, the scale, and sound of the cinema are much greater and amusing compare to the OTT.
In conclusion, I believe that even though the OTT service gets prosperous, the cinema industry will continue to prosper parallelly with the OTT service.
Thank you.
1. 정보에 오류는 없는가? 네
ReplyDelete2. 사실들의 인과관계는 잘 맞췄는가? 네
3. 디테일에 대해서 흐름을 맞출 만큼 잘 기술했는가? 네
4. 단어의 선택은 적절한가? prosperous -> famous/ popular/ successful/ thriving/well-known
5. 문법에 오류는 없는가?
OTT services stand for On The Top are on the rise. : 동사 두 개
OTT services like Netflix were becoming : were -> was
However, despite those signs of the prosperity : however 삭제
even through the rise of the OTT service : even though -> in spite of
Like the amusement park despite the prosperity of the online game.
: Similar to the case of amusement park, for example, it is still popular even though the online game appears.
1번이 가장 중요하고 5번으로 갈수록 덜 중요함.
+문장과 문맥은 훌륭한가?
1. Are there any errors in the information?
2. Are the causal relationships of the facts well matched?
3. Did you describe the details well enough to match the flow?
4. Is the word choice appropriate?
5. Are there any errors in the grammar?
Number 1 is the most important, and number 5 is less important.
+Is the sentence and context good? movies are halted of making.
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